But so many WORDS! After watching all 3 vid clips, I have my doubts as to how much of the STORY will be discernible (segment to segment). Steven had to use so so so many words to convey the story — OK, OK, granted there’s very little to watch since it’s all in development.

But I always worry when artists & designers are in charge of projects that are, in essence, stage stories.

My point: a stage director should have ultimate authority. A stage director knows how to to tell a story and put the focus where it needs to be.

Otherwise, all you have is an abstract mess of segments that look really ‘pretty’ and have a bunch of cool effects. But in the end, how much of the audience will go away thinking “that was a cool way to put a movie onto a water-screen.”